Hi Snapwing. Great to hear you're liking it.
I like that you usually cover her nips up, but every now and then let the guard down. Its nice to have a character like this who isn't exploited but instead holds some feminine mystery, keeps us looking forward to the next frame.
I find it rather curious (and funny) that you cover her nipples (oh those evil nipples) in all of the frontal or side scenes and show the entire rest of her breasts, BUT on page 29, in the second pannel, you show a complete crotch shot (I do note, minus a couple of parts to it ;) ). You must be American. Just funning with you< I am too. I think a skimpy costume would be a little rediculas for this character. Afterall, she isn't a superhero, she the freaking DEVIL (or assistant to thereof)!! Shen has a freaking TAIL!! :)
LOL
Often when I'm drawing the pencils the tail isn't so strategically placed. I cover the 'bits' later. Panel 2 was an oversight and I couldn't be bothered to go fix it. So why do I cover the nipples? Its partly for my own amusement and partly because it's always fun to leave at least something to the imagination I guess.
Thanks for the feedback.
I didn't mean to sound like I was busting on you, I really am enjoying the storyline and the art work. I look forward to seeing more.
As far as Pannel 2 goes, I tend to pick up on things like that, I guess I'm just a pervert in that respect.
It didn't sound like you were having a go. I'm glad you're enjoying it and I hugely appreciate the feedback.
Cheers
I am a recent member and jus luv ur wrk..
Keep it up!!..the artwork and story line is gr8...and no need to give her a costume..its perfect
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