Should the Nightstalker have a costume?

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Yes - a nice skimpy one
38% (56 votes)
No - I like it just the way it is
62% (93 votes)
Total votes: 149

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art4's picture
art4
25-May-2009

I find it rather curious (and funny) that you cover her nipples (oh those evil  nipples)  in all of the frontal or side scenes and show the entire rest of her breasts, BUT on page 29, in the second pannel, you show a complete crotch shot (I do note, minus a couple of  parts to it ;) ). You must be American. Just funning with you< I am too. I think a skimpy costume would be a little rediculas for this character. Afterall, she isn't a superhero, she the freaking DEVIL (or assistant to thereof)!! Shen has a freaking TAIL!! :)

 

art4

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admin
25-May-2009

LOL

Often when I'm drawing the pencils the tail isn't so strategically placed. I cover the 'bits' later. Panel 2 was an oversight and I couldn't be bothered to go fix it. So why do I cover the nipples? Its partly for my own amusement and partly because it's always fun to leave at least something to the imagination I guess. 

Thanks for the feedback.

 

 

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art4
26-May-2009

I didn't mean to sound like I was busting on you, I really am enjoying the storyline and the art work. I look forward to seeing more.

 

As far as Pannel 2 goes, I tend to pick up on things like that, I guess I'm just a pervert in that respect.

art4

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admin
26-May-2009

It didn't sound like you were having a go. I'm glad you're enjoying it and I hugely appreciate the feedback.

Cheers

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newsworthy
11-Jun-2010

I don't know about covering up her nipples nearly constantly with her hair or tail, isn't there some other way you can do it? Dresden Codak employed a few interesting methods for censorship, using the pannel borders or sillouettes. The tail and hair seems a little overused after a while. I don't mean this in any negative way, just trying to provide some constructive criticism.

Good luck thinking of more stuff!

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admin
11-Jun-2010

Now you mention it I can see I'm over using that mechanism. This is exactly why I invite criticism, so that you guys can stop me falling into these traps.

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sangus01
28-May-2009

I like that you usually cover her nips up, but every now and then let the guard down. Its nice to have a character like this who isn't exploited but instead holds some feminine mystery, keeps us looking forward to the next frame.

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snapwing
02-Jun-2009

I am a recent member and jus luv ur wrk..

Keep it up!!..the artwork and story line is gr8...and no need to give her a costume..its perfect

$n@ :p

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admin
02-Jun-2009

Hi Snapwing. Great to hear you're liking it.

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