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good stuff.
it seems to me your artwork gets better and better with each page man. im pretty stoked to see Sarah put those boots to good use and stomp some demon heads
format
It doesn't seem like you're using a comic format. That confused me; what order to read those panels in. You should use the common one and stick to it.
huh?
Hey Darkond2100, I guess you mean 2x3 for a six panel layout (ie 2 columns by 3 rows) rather than 3x2 that I use? Or were you thinkingof something else when you say 'common' layout?
The reason I use 3x2 is to fit the most info I can on the screen at once and minimize scrolling. I rarely deviate from this layout but I admit it's a pretty dull, I guess I should spend more effort on my panel design.
What do others think? Is the layout confusing?
nonono, you don't get what I'm sayin
American comics go from left to right, and downwards. Most Asian comics (Manga) go from right to left, downwards. Your comics are like what I've seen from Africa; downwards, left to right. I'm talking about the order that the palenls are READ in.
Ah right
Frankly, I think the layout
Frankly, I think the layout is fine. I read over a dozen different webcomics, and each one seems to have it's own panel flow; I've learned to adapt to each new comic rather quickly. Honestly, any change in the layout at this point would likely confuse me, and probably many others who have become accustomed to the current panel layout. :)
Strategic placement...?
First off, let me express how much I'm enjoying this comic! I love where the story is going, and the art style is refreshingly unique...But... I notice you have a tendency to use Sarah's tail and/or hair to cover her naughty bits... Why??? This IS an adult web comic, right? So why be so modest in what you show? And besides, it looks a little forced or "artificial", if you will.
re: Strategic placement...?
Thanks for the feedback.Yes I know what you're saying. I do tend to overdo the strategic placement thing and yes it can sometimes look contrived. I think it's been said before and I need to find more imaginative ways to do it. The reason is that I kind of like the idea of the main character being nude, but then not actually revealing anything so as to tantailise and titillate. Wouldn't hurt for me to slip up once in a while though...
OK... Here's an idea...
Well, hmm... She IS a stripper, right? Why can't she wear a bunch of different sexy outfits? Bras and panties, bikinis, super short shorts with a sexy top. Then from time to time you could do a scene with her changing outfits or taking a shower, (or if we're really lucky) her getting it on with someone, to satisfy us pervs!
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