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nightstalker beginnings chapter 5,  page 23

So I've reverted to the original art style for this page. I need more feedback on which is best so please vote for this style or the style on page 22 (previous page). You'll find the vote button at the top right column.

Anyway, erm, hows this going - are you bored? should the pace be faster? Is the story line unclear or confusing? Let me know. And don't forget to vote .

 

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